In the holidays, I had my birthday it was so fun, I had five friends Me and my brother we had a Balloon fight, we were running around the house. Then my friends arrived Lily Mia Brelle, Kiara. Me and my best friends Lily Kiara Brelle Mia. We had a disco, in the garage then we had a party I opened my present I got a warehouse voucher from Kiara.I got a unicorn pug book,panda sanitiser (blossom pink) that was from Brelle. Lily got me LOTS! Of presents I can’t mention much, but I can say one thing that she got me, Lily got me soft clay. Mia got me earrings They were dolphins stars and rainbows.
Friday, 7 May 2021
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very good happy birth day brook
ReplyDeleteHi Brook,
ReplyDeleteYour party sounded really fun and I bet the balloon fight would of been so cool and fun.You did great punctuation and I bet the disco was fun to!!