She knew it was going to be hard because they were as close as the sun and moon. They were walking to the Savannah Lakes where she was going to let the giraffe go. The giraffe had a pink and white marshmallow-looking leash. The girl had on a black bright tutu which was swaying in the wind. She walked along as quiet as a mouse. When she let the giraffe go in the Savannah Lakes she was so sad. Her teardrops fell like rain down her face. It was looked like she was in the deep cold sea drowning.
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